Danganronpa OC Reviews (CLOSED)

Greysmorningcoffee: Oshiro Daiki Pt. 2

Extra: He eats quite healthily but strawberry flavoured things always tempt him.  He also doesn't mind whatever he has to wear, as on some teams they've not had a male outfit available so he just wore the skirts and really he doesn't mind.  He prefers shorts, though.  He's been in a couple relationships, none big enough to recall and really the whole scene just was dull so he stepped back for a while.  And of course, while other people have trouble spooking him, even the cheesiest of horror movies sends him screaming.
I can relate to the cheesy horror movie thing.  Too well.  I like that he doesn't mind what he wears (men wear skirts in Scotland anyway) and the addition of him having been in relationships.  The fact that he eats healthily is a good addition!

SHSL: Cheerleader

Reaction to seeing death: If he's the first to stumble upon the body, he will probably scream very loudly and step back in horror.  If somehow nobody hears, he'll go find someone after a few minutes of horror but he likely will not be able to speak coherent sentences.  If he cares about the person he may sob all the while, and if he felt them a threat he will get over it faster and may not scream, he may instead jolt and let out a noise of surprise.
Good!

Reaction to being accused of killing: He would get offended and be a little irritated, and then if he got more suspicious he'd start accusing others and attempting to shoot down any accusation thrown his way.  Eventually he might even yell, but he'd try to stay calm and 'nice' though it wouldn't last long.  He'd also form a slight grudge against those accusing him and may feel hurt if it's someone he cares about a lot.  If it's someone he doesn't like, he'll probably insult them and try to accuse them in an almost desperate matter.
Also good!

How he'd kill: He probably wouldn't purposefully kill unless he was desperate or someone really hurt one of those he cares about.  If it was someone he didn't like, he'd probably deliver a swift, strong kick to wherever his foot finds (he is considerably strong and flexible due to cheerleading) and grab the heaviest item he could to crush their head in a brutal but painless matter.  He'd try to clean it up but probably would mess up somehow, killing isn't something he's got a lot of information on and he's of average intellect.  If anyone else, he probably would've accidentally killed them out of surprise by punching them incredibly hard, knocking them into something sharp/dangerous or by physically maiming them out of reflex.  He'd then hastily cover it up since it wasn't planned.  If he really cared about the person he'd feel guilty and not clean it up, and he'd likely confess from the straightaway.
Very consistent with his personality! 

Execution:
Daiki sobs on the ground, shaking and muttering to himself "no, no, no...". All of a sudden, he hears a cheering noise and opens his eyes. In front of him is a crowd of 'cheering' cardboard Monokumas, what for he can't tell...
A bunch of saws suddenly drop from the ceiling and start swinging wildly. He drops into a somersault, and all at once they stop swinging and go back up in the ceiling. He nods to himself, realising he needs to perform a "cheer routine", albeit an unconventional one, to survive. Through the floor comes a stack of cardboard Monokumas in a near triangle shape, except...no one on top. A giant hammer, only reaching about the middle of the pyramid, starts racing across the stage. Frantically he climbs to the top and barely crawls to the top as the hammer smashes through. The hammer keeps going but it is past Daiki now and doesn't turn around. Daiki, however, has crashed to the floor and a nasty bruise is on his side. He winces and stands up shakily, in lots of pain. Suddenly, the floor opens up and is crushed. Right underneath him are two giant steamroller-like wheels turning towards each other fast. He leaps up, not sure what else to do, but his shoelace is caught in the wheel and he is pulled down. His leg is pulled into the wheels and is crushed. He screams, clawing upwards as the wheels rotate. His leg is pretty much gone in a huge mess, and he keeps clawing but to no avail. He slips up, and falls into the wheels. His screaming and crying stops, replaced only with an unsettling crunch as it came to a stop. He was gone.
Very Danganronpa, I like it a lot.

I like Oshiro Daiki. I think he's a well thought out character with a healthy mix of good and bad points. I would love to see how he reacts to other characters in a Killing game and if he would end up killing or not!

Personality: 9/10
Character Design: 9/10
Originality: 8.5/10
Backstory: 8.5/10
Overall: 9.5/10

I like his character a lot! Thanks for sending him in!