Danganronpa OC Reviews (CLOSED)

HotCat37 : Itsuki Kaoi

Name: Itsuki Kaoi

Gender: Male

Nationality: Japanese

Sexuality: Not sure

Talent: Fisher
Interesting talent! I haven't seen it before!

Personality: Itsuki first comes off as rather childish and rude.  He'll annoy people just for the sake of being an ass and will be somewhat perverted besides not actually knowing anything about dirty stuff.  By somewhat perverted I mean that he's the one that suggests the guys of their group peek at the girls by the pool.  But that he doesn't know anything about sex nor understands dirty jokes.  He displays that attitude towards nearly everyone except Sora (Another OC) and Daisuke later on.  He doesn't show any signs of being grateful towards anyone up until the end of chapter 2.  After Sora's death he learns to be more thankful of others and becomes more helpful.  He's still annoying, but he doesn't do it on purpose anymore.  And besides his annoying and childish behaviour, he does show some signs of being patient.  Not really with people, but things like waiting for food or animals.
I like this! I was worried about his patience since fishing is a very patient sport, but you said at the end that he's patient when it comes to that so that's good! I like his personality!

Appearance: Itsuki has slightly wild red hair and green eyes.  He also has freckles.  He wears a darker green vest without sleeves on top of a red T-shirt and wears dark green shorts.  He also wears dark grey boots.  He has a yellow and red badge on both sides of his chest in odd shapes.
I like his design, but I would like to see a bit more related to fishing! Even something like changing the boots to gumboots would be good!

Backstory: Itsuki grew up with two parents and an older sister.  As a kid he lived very close to the beach and would always go fishing with his Mum.  It was a common thing for them to do since his parents had a fishing store and he wanted to become a fisher like them.  His Mother taught him the basics of fishing and after a while he became really good at it.  It did take him long to get his timing and patience right since he was a rather impatient kid.  He was also a bit spoiled by his sister and would display arrogant behaviour in front of other kids, thinking it made him cool.
I like this! I would like to see his relationship with his sister more fleshed out as well as why he thought it was cool to act arrogant, and why he's so perverted, but otherwise it's really good and I like it a lot!

Extra Info:
- His favourite fish is a bighead carp.
- He has a slight crush on Sora.
- He loves swimming.
I like this!

Reaction to seeing death: If it's a person he wasn't really close to he'll just be disgusted and stay away from the crime scene.  He'll constantly point out how gross the body is, eventually leading to him getting ignored by the other students.  When asked for his testimony he'll first be really annoying about it but would eventually give his testimony.
This suits him!

Reaction to being accused: He'll say that the accuser is really dumb for thinking that and would randomly accuse someone else to get the accuser off his back.  Later on in the story he'll try to be more calm about it but will still roll his eyes at the suggestion. 

How would they kill: He's a survivor.

Overall I like Itsuki! He's a very interesting character and I would love to see how he develops as well as see him more fleshed out!

Personality: 7/10
Character design: 8.5/10
Originality: 8/10
Backstory: 7/10
Overall: 8/10

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