Danganronpa OC Reviews (CLOSED)

Littlecolt : Lily Alexander Sonnet

I'm so sorry it took me so long to get this out! I've had a few personal things going on so Wattpad has been the last thing on my mind.

Name: Lily Alexander Sonnet

Nickname: Lily-Belle, Snowflake, Cinnamon
I love her name and her nicknames!

Gender: Female

Age: 14

Sexuality: Straight

SHSL/Ultimate: Ultimate Librarian
Interesting talent, I like it!

Appearance: She has rosy white skin and beautiful clear blue eyes.  Her face is like a reflection of innocence.  She has medium length cinnamon brown hair and has a soft dark blue and navy blue plaid scarf that she wears everywhere.  She wears a comfy black jacket over a white and grey blotched tee-shirt, with a medium length grey skirt that fades to white at the edges.  She has black converse and small blue earrings that complement her eyes.  Finally, she has a pair of black rectangular reading glasses, that she only wears when she's reading.
I love her design, it's so soft and pretty!

Personality: Lily-Belle is an innocent bean in essence, and shifts between her two common phases, being an excitable and somewhat reckless child and a shy and somewhat timid but helpful child.  She is very aware of her surroundings no matter what she is doing due to her photographic memory, and usually more childish with her behaviour.  A beacon of light in dark times if you will.  As more time goes on however, slowly, this light dims, and is replaced with a growing level of expressed maturity that to some just doesn't seem right with her.
Her personality is really well thought-out and interesting! I would like to see a bit more added to it, such as how she reacts to others, if she's intro, extro, or ambiverted, and how her maturity manifests itself! Otherwise, it's a great start and I really like it!

Reaction to death: Lily-Belle has a photographic memory, which is honestly a curse in this situation and later on, but it's also a gift.  She would stand in stunned silence for a moment, a horrified expression on her features and wide eyes taking in everything.  Then she would start breathing faster and start crying and retreat inward on herself, using her timid self as a defense.  She would do her best to be helpful to keep herself busy then.
This is really interesting, I like how her photographic memory becomes an important part of her character!

Reaction to being accused: She would be deeply hurt by their accusations but try not to show it.  Lily-Belle would remain calm as she could and do her best to refute what they're saying, but she wouldn't do well at this however.  So mostly she would depend on someone else to defend her.
This suits her well.

How would she kill: Lily-Belle would not kill for anything, but she would be forced to be an accomplice for the mastermind.  In essence she becomes too much of a problem with her photographic memory, the mastermind would simply force her to do her bidding with stealing a murder weapon, and then witness the event.  Then a little attempted memory tampering to make her think that she did it and boom!  She'll be taken care of at the next trial.
This sounds really interesting and I like it a lot! The fact that the mastermind would want to get rid of her due to her memory is an intriguing idea!

Likes: Reading, sharing her love of books, writing, matching games, guessing games.

Dislikes: Crowds, cussing, oranges, the colour yellow.

Strengths: Reading, running, climbing.

Weaknesses: Swimming, loud noises.
These suit her!

Execution name: Shattered Innocence.
Execution: Lily-Belle stared in utter disbelief at her classmates, and then turned her gaze to Monokuma, "H-How can I be the blackened!?"  She demanded, absolutely confused.  The bear let out his iconic laugh, "A bit of amnesia isn't going to prevent me from letting justice prevail!"  Monokuma chuckled pointedly.
The young librarian balled her hands into fists, and winced slightly as she dug her nails into the soft flesh of her palm.  "I have a photographic memory!"  Lily shouted with obvious frustration.  Monokuma let out a little 'hmph', "Your point?"  He dryly asked.
Lily huffed out her cheeks childishly and huffed, before she opened her hands and slammed them on her podium, palms down. 
"My point is that I couldn't have killed anyone if I don't remember it!  Use a lie detector or whatever, I'm being one hundred percent honest!"  She explained.
"You could just be saying that."  Monokuma pointed out, "Think back, I'm sure you'll remember it."  He prompted, an eerie smile on his features.  The little girl thought hard, in complete disbelief of what she was being told.  She couldn't have killed someone-right?
However, memories began to flood back to her as if they were recorded and rendered with HD quality.  But what she saw wasn't of her killing a student, it was of someone else, who looked similar, but with notable differences.  She was gagged and tied up in a corner, trembling in fear. Her eyes had been puffy from crying and her throat sore from screaming.  She had been forced to watch the murder, and her mind had buried the memory in an attempt to protect her, but nothing stays buried forever...
While she recalled this horrific event she shut out the world around her, and never noticed that she had started crying, slowly at first, but eventually full-on sobbing.  Once again she was trembling, and she slid down to the floor.  Her back was pressed to the podium and she hugged her knees to her chest.  "I believe her reaction is sufficient proof."  Monokuma commented amidst the shock of the other students.
Lily-Belle was brought back to reality by those words, and the shattered bean wasn't going to go down without a fight.  Because while she was weak and innocent, shielded from the harshness of reality for so long, she was shown the harsh truth here in this school.  She learned, and she knew the value of life.  Hers might be forfeited here, but it was the least she could do to pass on what she had seen.  What she remembered as hard undeniable truth.  Unknowingly she had recalled something she wasn't supposed to.  Monokuma had attempted to tamper with her mind and replace that memory with another, one which contained her killing someone.
"I didn't kill them, I remember now.  I could never forget...never forget."  Lily-Belle mumbled as her classmates gathered around. 
They knew that she was an innocent bean, or at least she acted like one, and so when she had broken down they had gathered to see why she was crying...if they could help before it was time for her to be executed. 
"What are you talking about?  Of course you did."  Monokuma said, growing somewhat annoyed at her continuous 'it wasn't me' banter.
"I-It was the mastermind, they made me steal the weapon and watch as they committed murder.  I was tied up and gagged, I couldn't move or look away.  I have a photographic memory, both a gift and a curse...please believe me..." Lily-Belle begged pitifully.
It was all she could do.  She had lost something important.  She had lost the trust of her classmates, something that she might have never earned back, had she lived.  Their faces showed their uncertainty, but some were shifting towards what could be called belief.  If only she had more time...exactly a minute after she spoke a rapier shot up from floor underneath her and impaled her.  Burning pain raced along every nerve and muscle, and she screamed in agony.  Someone pulled her off of it, which caused her to experience even more pain.  Lily-Belle grew dizzy and she could hear her heart pumping erratically, and she knew that she couldn't last much longer.
"What did they look like?"
With her last breath she answered the student that had believed her.  She told them who they looked like, but told them that it was not them because there were major differences that she had noticed, major ones that were hard to spot.
Her attention to detail had yet to fail her, and she died knowing that at least someone knew of what she had seen.
And so Lily Alexander Sonnet died in an execution that seemed too hasty, which caused more suspicion on Monokuma.  Her death had shattered her innocence once and for all, but it did more than that.  It opened the eyes of her classmates, hopefully before it was too late.
Her blue scarf remained, and it's backstory (All that the scarf had seen) reminded her classmates to keep hope.  And in it the students actually found a note from Lily-Belle.
It read "I hope you never have to see this, but I wanted to write this in case I die, or am executed.  Never give up hope, because all of you have amazing talents to share with the world, and you have the power to protect those you care about.  I believe in you, so try to believe in yourselves, okay?  ~Lily-Belle"
I love this, it's so intriguing and a really interesting part of the story! The fact that her execution was so simple and not overly grotesque really hits the point you were trying to make with Lily's death.
Calling her a bean was just something I wanted to point out quickly, it's adorable and also adds to her likeability as a character.

Backstory: Lily grew up mostly as an only child, since her older sister Belinda went off to college when she was six.  From an early age she displayed an amazing memory, and picked up reading and writing by age three.  Speaking, however, took her longer, to make up for her quick success in reading and writing, is what her parents jokingly told her.  Lily-Belle devoured books as her literary understanding and reading speed increased over time.  Her parents, a large supporter of her reading hobby, supplied her with books whenever they could, and dreamed that their child could become a legendary author.  Lily-Belle also was an innocent and helpful angel, as her high school's librarian dubbed her.  She readily offered to assist her in organising the shelves and putting away books, to which the librarian hesitantly accepted at first, however Lily quickly proved that she was reliable.  Over a short span of time Lily-Belle had organised the library into an efficient system, and helped out as often as she could, since she had a knack for guiding her fellow peers towards books they would enjoy.  Even people who did not enjoy reading.  Lily-Belle caused some excitement due to her transformation of the library, which got some people asking questions.  Eventually it came to Hope's Peak's attention that there was an astounding librarian in their midst, and they extended an invitation to enrol in the school.  Lily-Belle was sad to leave her high school, but the prospect of an even bigger library was not something she could ignore!
I like her backstory, it's simple and interesting!

Family:
Father: Cameron Ezekiel Sonnet
Mother: Alyn Harriet Sonnet
Older Sister: Belinda Rachel Sonnet
Grandmother: Martha Lynn Rider
Grandfather: Gerold Tenner Rider

Other: She is rather good at alphabetising things, or just organising things in general.  In fact she has a photographic memory, which is both a blessing and a curse.  She will never, ever forget a crime scene, or any gore.  Ever.
She is also a national spelling bee champion, multiple times.
Her Grandparents have a russet and brown border collie named Rocco.
I like this!

Nickname History:
Snowflake - Her Father was the first to come up with this, and often called her his sweet little snowflake.  Her Mother and older sister picked up on it and sometimes called her snowflake as well.
Cinnamon - Her Grandparents on her Mother's side began calling her cinnamon due to a baking/cooking accident.  Lily was about five years old and was helping her Grandma make cinnamon pancakes.  She had a little blue stool to stand on so that she could easily reach the counter, and she'd been instructed to add a small dash of cinnamon.  Unfortunately for Lily her Grandparents russet and brown border collie Rocco ran through the kitchen and knocked her stool, and her along with it, down.  Lily ended up falling on her butt, and with cinnamon all in her hair and on the floor.  Funny enough, if her Grandfather hadn't seen the cinnamon fall into her hair they never would have known it was there.  It blended in well with her cinnamon brown hair.  And so she was nicknamed Cinnamon.
Lily Belle - She already had two nicknames at this point and was like why not add another one to the list, except this time it would be of her own creation!  She searched her school's library (Which is how she learned of its somewhat dysfunctional state) for a name book and began looking when she stumbled across Lily Belle.  She loved the name, not as much as her own since her parents gave it to her, but she decided that she would declare it as her nickname, and people at school referred to her by it sometimes.
I love the explanation of her nicknames! They kind of remind me of when I was little and my parents and friends would give me random nicknames, it adds to her character and the stories behind them are really sweet and nice!

Overall, Lily is a really adorable and kind character and I would love to see her in a story! Other than a bit of adding to her personality, I think she's really well thought-out and I love her so much!

Personality: 7/10
Character design: 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Backstory: 9/10
Overall: 8.5/10

Thanks for sending in your OC! (And thanks for waiting!)