Danganronpa OC Reviews (CLOSED)

Littlecolt: Cody Pen Williams Pt. 2

Execution:
Execution name: A straight path
He gave a small smile, a strained and painful smile. All of his morals, tossed aside in an instant. In that one moment he'd decided that his life and future was worth more than everyone else in this room's. He'd doomed himself to his fate that this bear would bring him. His spirit would forever be burdened with a heavy feeling of regret.
When a claw tried to grab him he calmly jumped aside; "I'll just walk if it's alright with you." He said, still dodging the claw. His voice had been hollow and monotone. So empty and dead.
His footsteps echoed as he was led to the room where he would die. Monokuma might have even made some snappy remark, but he didn't hear it. He couldn't. His mind was so overwhelmed by his actions. His disposable and heinous crime. The room he entered held a path. It seemed to be in a light oak forest, all bright and open. Clearings and animals scattered around. He continued walking until he got to a crossroad. A question was upon it. To judge his morals. Again and again he chose right to his morals and actions.
And then the last one came.
"Would you kill someone for your freedom?"
He didn't deserve freedom. Not after what he'd done. So he chose wrong. He'd done it. It didn't matter if his morals were right. He walked down the path that was 'no'.
Monokuma began to sing 'Liar liar pants on fire'. He literally set Cody's pants on fire. The boy, overwhelmed with pain, stopped, dropped and rolled, eventually putting it out and getting the flaming garments off. However his legs were pretty crispy at that point. Then the ceiling above released a bomb that dropped into the forest. The blast range killed him, however little did everyone know, Monokuma protected Cody's body. To preserve it and restore it to normal. To probably display in front of the other students later as a 'joke'.
I like the surprise ending, twist and then another twist, it's very Danganronpa.  Monokuma protecting Cody's body is a really interesting idea.

Backstory: He grew up hearing about people who needed help. His Mother was a brilliant doctor, or at least that's what he thinks of her, while his Father was a counsellor. At first he wanted to be like his Mother, because he thought that he could be more helpful and save more lives that way. But then he started hearing about what his Mum had to do, all of those surgeries. And the fact that the fate of your patient's life sometimes rests on you, and you alone, he backed out. He couldn't deal with all of that, or seeing blood. So naturally me turned to his Father's career, somewhat hesitantly. He just didn't know how much he could help others that way. But his Father was patient and began to teach him about his job and some of the skills he had. He began to warm up to it, and decided that it was his calling in life.
Everything he's learned so far is from his Dad, and some stuff from his Mum about treating injuries, and he is determined to survive with as many people as possible. So that they can all follow their dreams.
An ultimate who follows another talent instead of going to what their actual talent is from the start is a really interesting and cool idea!  Also, an Ultimate not sure about following their talent or being nervous about it is really original and I like it a lot!

Family:
Father: Cyrus Leon Williams
Mother: Daisy Janis Williams
Younger brother: Michael Ciel Williams

Other: He has insomnia, so he can often be seen napping throughout the day. He gets nightmares more and more frequently when he helps others with injuries and other such things. But he will still help anyway. Eventually he will start dozing off more and more from the lack of sleep and nightmares however. In the nightmares he imagines that he couldn't save whoever he was helping, and they died.
Hope's Peak Academy also accidentally put him as the Ultimate Counsellor, when instead he is actually the Ultimate Psychiatrist. 
However after surviving the Killing game, he decided to keep it because he'd grown a sort of attachment to the title.

I don't really have much to say about the character, but not because he's a bad character.
Actually, its the opposite.  I really love his character design and his weaknesses.  The insomnia is really interesting and I wonder if that could possibly make the others believe he's a killer if a murder happens at night.  He's really well thought out and I love it!  

Personality: 8.5/10
Character Design: 9/10
Originality: 8.5/10
Backstory: 9.5/10
Overall: 9.5/10

He's a really well-balanced and interesting character, I like him a lot!