Danganronpa OC Reviews (CLOSED)

Delicatehearts : Melanthios Shiroko

Name: Malanthios Shiroko
Name meaning:
Melanthios - A Greek name, means "black, dark" and "flower".
Shiroko - "Shiro" means white and "ko" means small.
I love her name!

Age: 16

Gender: Transgender, male to female.
Has she transitioned or not? Otherwise I really like it, I've never heard of a transgender DR character before!

Nationality: Half-Greek and Half-Japanese.

Personality: Melanthios is a tough and temperamental girl. She can be rude and very straight-forward most of the times without meaning to, thinking that many of the people she talks to can handle her bluntness. She seems very graceful on the outside but don't let her "innocent" and "delicate" appearance fool you, if you push her buttons the wrong way then you'll regret it very much. Though, the only times Melanthios is graceful is when...actually she's never graceful.
She just concentrates extremely well on her tasks especially shooting, she pushes all of her anger away and focuses on it. Melanthios at first, is actually a quiet but cold girl, until you trigger one of her pet peeves then she'll turn into a volcano and erupt on you. She is actually just a stressed and confused girl who wants to see her family again, Melanthios wasn't always an arrogant girl. When she was younger she was a sweet and playful child, until tragedy struck and her happy emotions began to lose their ways to her heart. Causing her only to feel anger, stress, and pain for the recent years.
Despite this, Melanthios is actually a very good listener if you become close friends with her but that's rare so good luck, she would definitely sit you down and listen to all of your problems even if it takes hours and hours. You can always count on her to have your back on anything since she's the type of person to pretend that they don't care about you but they would kill themselves if you got hurt.
Though you should not push your luck, it's very hard to approach Melanthios with her cold heart, she only speaks up when angered or when having to yell over gunfire which she had done in her past years, the girl doesn't hold conversations very well - even with her siblings its awkward.
She seems to have a very contrasting personality. I'm not sure if it's the way you worded it or if it's her, but she seems to be a bit of a contradiction. I'd recommend maybe taking some stuff away from her personality as right now it's a bit busy. I like that she's tough, temperamental and concentrates well on her talent, as well as her softer side which only shows up when you really get to know her, but the mention of 'should not push your luck' when trying to get to know her makes it seem like she doesn't like or want to get to know anyone. However I think she has a lot of good points, you just need to declutter her personality a little bit so it's smoother and cleaner! :)

Appearance: Melanthios has long white hair that falls to her mid-back, usually pushed up inyo a bun or a tight and high ponytail. She was unfortunately born being an albino, meaning her skin, hair, and eyes lack the normal humane colours such as olive, brown, ivory etc. Her skin is a sickly white, almost like snow with very very faint freckles dusted along her cheeks and the bridge of her nose.
Melanthios has an ice-blue doe shaped eye with long, white eyelashes and similar naturally arched eyebrows. The reason why she only has one eye is simple. She lost it of course - it is covered by a grey eyepatch. Her body structure is slender and skinny with no curves whatsoever, she is sadly not tall, only standing at around 5'3 and weighing about 58 kgs/127 lbs.
Melanthios' outfit consists of a cream-coloured turtleneck with each sleeve having buttons that reach up to her elbow, a smokey grey shaded, running jacket is tied around her waist, covering a brown belt with encrusted silver details that holds up her tight navy blue jeans and has two gun holders, each containing a pistol that's always fully loaded.
Two silver chains hang from each of her pockets and a pair of brown leather heeled ankle boots cover her feet. She is always seen wearing a golden necklace with a locket that's shaped like a bleeding heart flower, custom-made but no one knows what's in the locket.
I really love her design! It's very original and gives her a strong silhouette, and I feel that it would be very striking in person. Her being albino is something I've never seen before in an OC and I really love the colour coordination! The only issue I have is that I don't think she would be allowed to carry fully loaded guns around if she was in a killing game; keep the guns but take the bullets out maybe?