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HotCat37 : Mao Fujita

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HotCat37's OC is from her Fanfiction titled The Downfall of Trust. If you're planning on reading it, there's spoilers in this review :3

Name: Mao Fujita
I like her name!

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Sexuality: She's pretty straight most of the time but wouldn't mind if her love interest was female.
So bisexual, but with more of an attraction towards guys.

Ultimate/SHSL: Therapist

Appearance: Mao has mid-long wavy black hair and crimson eyes.  She wears a frilly short red dress with a white vest on top of it.  She wears black socks and grey shoes.
Cute! 

Personality: Mao at first seems like a bit of a stalker and pretty creepy.  If you get to know her though, she really cares for others even though she doesn't show it sometimes.
I like the addition of her seeming creepy and stalkerish, but I want to know why she's like that. Moving on to the 'thing' that happens in her backstory, what causes her to become so angry? Does she have little patience? Is she a hothead? If so, how would her patients react to her hotheadedness when she's doing her job as a therapist? Would they be a little scared of her if they saw her anger?  I like her personality so far, though!

Nationality: Unknown.
This is interesting.

Backstory: She was dropped off by her parents at an orphanage when she was only 2 months old.  When she was 3, two men adopted her.  Her two dads worked at a woodworking shop and Mao often helped out.  She once hit her hand really hard with a hammer which is why she doesn't like working with hammers a lot.  In elementary school, there was this girl in Mao's class who was depressed.  Mao became interested in becoming a therapist when she heard from her parents that the girl was getting better after going to a therapist multiple times.
She studied it for a long while and began developing her talking skills.  She turned out to be really good at it and began making her own therapy lessons. 
Trust's Peak recognised her talent and invited her to enrol in the school when she was old enough. 
Mao once got arrested for nearly beating a boy to death when he made a homophobic remark about her parents.  While this incident never happened again, Mao will still become furious when people make homophobic remarks.
I like her 'origin' story about the girl who was depressed.  Was she friends with the girl and that's how she found out she was depressed?  Either way, it's a nice backstory and I like it!  The addition of beating the boy up is a bit odd, considering her talent would probably require her to be calm and considerate of others.  However, if you wanted to change her backstory and make it so the boy had been taunting her for ages, she had a bad day, etc etc (she had reached her patience limit with the boy), then that would make more sense.  I still think, though, that beating him to near death is a liiiittle bit over the top ahaha.

Reaction to seeing death: She first wouldn't really react depending on which person it is.  However, inside she would probably scream in fear.
Sounds good!  Is she the type to run and tell everyone or just try to forget about it and let someone else find them?

How would they kill: Mao would beat the victim to death with any object that would cause major harm.
How would she hide that it was her? Would she be the type to just outright admit she did it or would she be able to act innocent for a really long time?

I don't have much to say on Mao, but that isn't a bad thing! I like her character, she's getting to the point of being well fleshed-out, and if you put in a bit of extra work here and there, she would be amazing!  If you gave her more of a backstory, I feel she could be a Maki-type character, really good with people but with a violent side nobody sees very often, if at all.

Personality: 6.5/10
Character Design: 6.5/10
Originality: 7/10
Backstory: 8.5/10
Overall: 7.5/10

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