Danganronpa OC Reviews (CLOSED)

Spottedclaw1234 : Faille Nozomi

Name: Faille Nozomi
Faille (Old French) is a soft, light-woven fabric having a ribbed texture and originally made of silk which is perfect for her soft personality.
Nozomi - It literally means hope.
I love the explanation of her name, as well as her name. 

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Nationality: Half-Japanese, half-French

Personality: Faille is known as a shy and reserved person, she is often afraid of people touching her or getting too close to her face.
But when Faille manages to get friends, she does anything to keep them from making her naive and easy to tease. Faille is a very kind person to animals, especially rabbits and children, however she struggles to talk to people older than her or her age, since she might explode into a huge scared, nervous wreck and have a panic attack. Faille is also very clumsy and tends to make mistakes a lot that makes people angry at her, since she always feels like people are depending on her to do things at a rapid pace.
She is very emotionally weak caused by low self-esteem and getting bullied throughout her childhood, causing huge panic attacks to take place.
Faille loves arts and crafts and is very creative and artistic, and loves to draw and create stuffed animals in her spare time.
I like her personality, but there doesn't seem to be any mention of a mental illness which could cause her to get the scars on her wrists?  Forgive me if I'm wrong, but I'm not sure people without a mental illness would harm themselves intentionally.  Otherwise, it's got a good mix of good and bad points, and I love the cutesy side of her!

Appearance: Faille stands at 154cm and is completely flat-chested. She has long soft dark pink hair that reaches to her shoulders and tied long strands of her hair in twin tails.
She has turquoise eyes and a light skin complexion. Her ribbons are yellow, her bangs are long and reach down her forehead to her eyes. She wears a high-waisted light pink skirt that goes around her thighs. On the middle of the skirt is a red ribbon tied around her waist, at the end of the skirt is white ruffles. She has a pink hoodie with bunny ears underneath a white buttoned-up shirt. She wears pink and white knee-high striped socks. She has a light purple backpack where she carries her toy supplies. She has scars and bruises around her wrist from self-harming and being bullied.
I like her design, it's quite cute.

Backstory: Faille was born into a pretty talented family, as she got older she was known for having a pretty and popular sister that was awarded for her ice skating skills.
Faille, however, was more interested in toys rather than the ice, making her family a bit confused on why she didn't follow the traditions her family had.
- During Faille's time as school, her sister was very popular and her sister tried to include her in her life but her friend's were cruel to Faille and often teased her for everything from her looks to not being as talented as her sister, they even said she was abandoned by her family and her sister is not really her sister, just a nuisance to her. She was tormented and was physically assaulted by them whenever her sister wasn't around, when she was alone she spent her time making toys and learning about mechanics, sewing, carpentry, electronics, and robotics. Her mother noticed her learning, and they started a toy shop, which eventually got popular as more people started coming. Soon her sister's friends stopped by and commented on how her family's money was making her get popular, then they left.
- One day, someone in charge of a large toy company stopped by the shop and offered Faille a job, which she shyly took. Soon her toy company became known to the city she was in and with her age, Hope's Peak came along and she received her Ultimate talent alongside her sister, who had gotten her talent earlier.
Her backstory suits her, as well as her talent and reasons for being who she is.

Extra Info: She knows a lot about mechanics, sewing, carpentry, electronics and robotics. Due to her backstory she is deathly afraid of people who are bigger than her.
Despite her talent in making wooden tools, she has a knack for making stuffed animals, puppets, dolls, and she often sells or gives them out to kids or families who don't have anything.
She loves christmas.
She is obsessed with rabbits and has a deep passion for them.
She has an older sister who's name is Bruins Nozomi, who is the Ultimate Ice Skater.
She has a cousin called Stella Hayashi who is the Ultimate Concert Singer.
She owns a lot of toy shops.
The fact that she gives toys to less fortunate families is really sweet and I love that side of her, it seems she's a very kind character, if a bit quiet and timid!

Ultimate/SHSL Talent: Wooden Toy Maker
Original talent!

Reaction to seeing death: She will either cry, throw up or scream. She would cover her eyes to block the dead body from her vision.

Reaction to being accused: Due to her nervy personality she would have a complete meltdown and start panicking, making her seem more suspicious. She would start to cry and stutter her words while speaking.

How would they kill: I like to see her killing a person using scissors, a hammer, carving knife, anything to do with wooden toy making she might use, but the death would be either an accident or from the Motive Video. I like to think her motive video would be about her family, since she loves her family so much it would lead to her taking someone's life since she might go crazy with desperation to save her family and friends. Her argument would be 'I would have been with my family and friends' and she would say that she would do anything to keep them.
I like this.

Execution:
Title: Faille the Puppeteer
Faille stands on a stage with a red curtain with many Monokumas watching her. Monokuma then tied white strings which held spiked nails around her legs and hands and would start to control her body. She is spun around, moved to the right and left, she is thrown into each side of the curtain. She is then turned upside-down and launched across the stage hard. Eventually a rope is tied around her neck with nails, she lets out a scream.
She is tossed and turned until she gets dizzy, then she is pulled very high and dropped to the floor.
Dead.
Her execution suits her talent and it's also very Danganronpa.

I like Faille's character, she seems like a very kind and considerate person who has a really cute personality!

Personality: 7/10
Character Design: 9.5/10
Originality: 8.5/10
Backstory: 9/10
Overall: 8/10

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