The Lost Revenge

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The Lost Revenge - Lovatic_HarryHook 

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The Lost Revenge - Lovatic_HarryHook 

THIS IS CHAPTERS 1 -16 

(Not including aesthetics)

Cover, Title, and Blurb 5 / 5

Grammar and Spelling 8 / 10

Detail 9 / 10

Plot 10 / 10

Originality 5 / 5

Flow of the Story 5 / 5

Overall Enjoyment 5 / 5

Total 47 / 50

MATURE: Some death, but nothing to graphic.

LGBTQ+: NO

Wow! This book was great from the start. It immediately jumped right into the plot, and made me keep reading. 

The anti-hero was well written, along with the best friend, Ava. (She is my absolute favorite character, and that will probably never change). The other characters were also well written, and you gave each of them their own unique personalities. Like Bethany, always being helpful. 

The details are a very important part of the story. You did a great job! The crack on the ceiling, the mole on her hand, it all helped me picture who, what, or where you were describing. 

Overall, this story has great detail and great people with personalities. I can tell this is going to be a great novel! 

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