At first the cover. It's really simple I would like to suggest you to change it with something which can show a glimpse of the story. The story is really great but the cover can't attract readers. Title is perfect also reflect the storyline nicely. Author did a really good job with blurb. It's really good.
✓ Grammar and Spelling : 9/10
There are some grammatical errors which I think can be corrected while editing.
✓Details : 9/10
I wanted to give 20/10. But there is some points I want author edit, firstly I want to say
The way author detailed the story it felt so real like, whatever happening in the story actually I'm witness of it. But then, there are few para which is need editing like, Chapter one, para no.25. The conversation between Shuichi and his mother. It was well detailed but the the writing style wasn't perfect. I think it would be great if author split it, in two pera. There are few pera in the story like this so, when the author will edit the story, I hope she/ he will keep this as suggestion. Although author did a really good job.
✓Plot : 10/10
Plot was so amusing and unique. The way author wrote Shuichi's life. It was outstanding.
✓Originality : 5/5
A pure original story.
✓Flow : 5/5
The story flowed perfectly. It was really good.
✓Overall Enjoyment : 4.5/5
The story was really good. I'm really happy that I got the book to read and review.
