The cover with the skeleton all alone really sets the aura. The title is simple and precise, loved it. The blurb was intriguing .
Grammar and spelling - 9.8
There were a few grammatical errors like of punctuation marks at some points but other than that , all was lovely.
Details- 10/10
I loved the way you kept giving us little details about all of them. Reading it with your profile pic alongside made me feel like it's all going to be very significant later, in a very ominous way.
Plot- 9.6/10
There were some paragraphs which you should have mentioned earlier 'coz otherwise at some points it felt as if there was a big jump .
Originality- 5/5
Flow of the story - 4.9/5
Overall Enjoyment - 5/5
Total - 49.3/50
Here, I am being totally honest . I just read the first paragraph and boy was I hooked! You totally killed the starting .
But the paragraphs can be more divided for easier reading and the memories can be put in like italics or bold or something to give more emphasis on them.
I also loved how you kept us engaged and kept giving small small hints and clues about the characters .
