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Paths Undefined - CalmGuy9 

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Paths Undefined - CalmGuy9 

Judge: srabonyislam 


✓Cover, Title, Blurb : 4/5

The cover is overall beautiful. About the title, I think it's perfectly suitable for the story. Finally the blurb, it's short but it can attract readers. I really appreciate it the way, author wrote it. Good Job.

✓ Grammar and Spelling : 7/10 

I didn't find many but, there is some grammatical errors, needs to be correct. I know we are not professional, so it's ok. But, I will suggest you to be careful about it. 

✓Details : 6/10 

About detailing the story. I'm really sorry to say but, I don't think your detail is enough. Story need more details. In every part of your story you have written "Meera" "Vikram" and other characters name. I don't get it, why you wrote that. Firstly, I thought maybe it's describe POV(point of view) but, no it's not. Then why? I'm sorry about this but, I really didn't get it. Also, if you wrote something about past, you should have point out that part as Flashback or Past. It's little confusing. Not all readers can understand sudden things. So, I'm suggesting you this. 

✓Plot : 8/10 

Honestly, the plot is really good. If I say, it's pretty common from friends to being lovers but, this story plot hold some really good turning points. And, I really like the plot.

✓Originality : 3/5 

As I said before. It's kinda common but, it have things that make it worthy reading.

✓Flow : 3/5 

Story flow is good. But, need little more details. So that, it won't feel rushed away. 

✓Overall Enjoyment : 4/5 

I have read 10 Chapters of this book. And, really enjoyed it. I love the story plot, love the way it's flowing and all characters. I would like to suggest author to make some changes in it while editing, as I said earlier. I hope my Review will help you(author). You did a good job. I really love your book. Best of luck. 

✓Total : 35/50

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