Please remember that this is just my opinion, and you don't have to change anything if you don't want to.
Great book. I enjoyed it very much. The main and supporting characters are well done and explored, and work quite dynamically. There were very few grammar and spelling inaccuracies, few and far between. The setting was pleasant, the plot itself is great, and has plenty of detail to refine it.
This story could use some more in-the-moment action, and it felt a little rushed in a few places. Overall though, great story, definitely would read any follow up story.
