I LOVE the title. It's unique, intriguing, and romantic.
The blurb is much of the same. Intriguing, but doesn't spoil the whole plot, so nice.
The Cover is cute, but doesn't catch my eye. It's not a bad cover, and I like the way the title is in the box, but if I was just scrolling and saw the cover, there is a chance I'd just scroll on by.
Grammar and Spelling 10 / 10
Nothing. I saw nothing to correct. That being said, I was more focused on the plot and the drama and the cute relationships, hehe.
Detail 10 / 10
Dang. That's the sum of it. Very precise wording, while also placing me in the scenes with those characters. The descriptions are what make stories amazing, and you've done just that.
Plot 9 / 10
The Plot wasn't bad, I actually really enjoyed it, but the whole drama, the 'I didn't mean to fall in love' stuff would've been better if introduced earlier. There were some parts of the chapters that felt like a filler, and could've been taken out. Those parts were well written, but you don't want to make the reader wait tooooo long. Making then wait a bit is fine though, and actually encouraged. Just know the line.
Originality 4 / 5
Flow of the Story 4 / 5
The chapters were like 30 minutes each to read, and four took 2 hours, so maybe just try to shorten them just a little bit would be great. That being said, the story was interesting enough to make me forget about the clock and just keep reading.
