Cover: I think the cover is very pretty, it's just that the title isn't capitalized. I understand that the title was too long and wouldn't fit on the cover, so I suggest changing the font instead. Also, since IU is the female lead of the story, I think she should be included in the cover instead of just the male leads. I was confused at first since it said in the accomplishments that the book got in IU because IU wasn't in the cover.
Title:
It's not the most unique title but it is good. At first, I didn't really get why the title was like that but after reading the blurb, I got the gist of it.
Blurb:
As for the blurb, it's very captivating to say the least. Transmigration novels isn't really common in Wattpad. I like that there's enough information to grasp the plot of the novel which added to its charm. In a reader's point of view, this is something I would definitely read.
Grammar & Spelling: 7/10
I noticed this while reading and you tend to use similar words often in a sentence— for example,
1.) "The noisy discussion made by the girls made Ji-eun..."
Instead of using the word 'made' twice, change it to, "The noisy discussion of the girls made Ji-eun..."
2.) "She sat up and took out the earphones from her schoolbag and put them on..."
You used 'and' twice which made the sentence repetitive and awkward. Although, it is acceptable to use a word twice or more in a sentence, it is better that such repetitions are avoided. I suggest using a comma instead of 'and'— "She immediately sat up, took out the earphones from her schoolbag and put them on..."
Besides those I've pointed out, I didn't notice any other mistakes.
Details: 8/10
I like that you added the characters pictures in the chapters and the information in the introduction.
Plot: 10/10
The plot idea is very unique and something you certainly would not see in novels a lot.
Originality: 10/10
As I said, the plot is new, fresh, and just very original!
Flow of the story: 4/5
Like other authors, you focused on the setting but also didn't linger on it too much. Your story pace is just right so keep it up!
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I really loved the plot and the characters' emotions were just so well portrayed. You focused more on the descriptions instead of the dialogues which made the imagination so specific and I loved that. Overall, it was really enjoyable to read, definitely would recommend!
Total: 47/50
Ps. If you changed the font and it still doesn't fit, I suggest changing the title to 'Faraway Love'
Edit: The reviewer graded this on the other cover.
