I just love all three of these. The cover is simple yet elegant, it somehow matches with the story plot. There's no other title that suits this story other than the current one in use! The blurb is catchy and neat. Although, it's a bit long, it is arranged in a systematic and easy-to-read pattern. It has included copyright and warning. Wise move.
Grammar and Spelling 8/10
There are some minor spelling and punctuation mistakes. But every book has it since you can't pay attention to details. Grammar's okay. Those mistakes do not affect the readers much. You need to take care of them when a judge is reading your book or some 'high standards and serious' or very 'picky' readers take a look at your book.
Detail 9/10
I see your story doesn't include much details about other characters in the initial chapters of the story. But it's alright since you need to highlight the lead character, Camsy. (You did a nice job describing and evaluating the lead character though).To be honest, you don't need to include heavy details in your story and your current work is just perfect the way it is.
Plot 9/10
I got hooked to the plot. It's very interesting and surprising me all the time. For example, Parker's such a gentleman and intelligent guy, he didn't know leaving Camsy back then without a goodbye may hurt her feelings. You're surprising your readers with unpredictable and unexpectable occasions and emotions, and I like that. The whole reunion (emotionally included) of Camsy and Parker, it happened through the wedding planning event. It's very realistic and at the same time, it looks like fade's in action. I just love it!
Originality 5/5
I'd say pretty original. The story's not one of those same plots and characters which I have seen on many Wattpad stories. It has its own interesting and unique storyline. Also, all this wedding planning business, I've learnt some from the industry too. :D
Flow of the Story 5/5
The paragraphing was insanely perfect! You've spaced at the right times, italicized at the right words. Therefore, your flow of story is blameless! Your actual flow of story when you narrated the story, it's excellent too. You do bring the ease of reading to your readers!
Overall Enjoyment 5/5
I'm really enjoying 'The Wedding Effect'. I'll read till the end to find out what's gonna happen to the main characters (and also side characters)! Enjoyable read. I definitely recommend it to other readers.
