The cover gives off a vibe of a heartbreak story with lots of crying and sad scenes. The two characters on it being serious and droplets flowing down. I do like the title being well integrated with the pictures! 5
Title:
For Hearts. Does it mean they do what they do for Love? It makes me unsure what the author means by the title. A bit of mystery perhaps.4
Blurb:
From the blurb it feels like just another romance novel. From co conspirators to lovers type of thing. I'd love to see maybe an excerpt from the novel giving a little insight or an intriguing dialogue or even a quote.
The second last sentence needs to be fixed up slightly as it doesn't read right at the end. 3
Grammar and spelling:
You could try to make the sentences shorter in certain parts. Or divide the long sentences into two. Also there's a few mistakes here and there but a good proofread should make it visible to you. During the conversations of the characters, be careful with the capital letters and punctuations. 6
Detail:
There's a fair bit of detail but not boring or over the top detail. It is adding to the enjoyment of the story and we get to experience the scenes vividly.
Plot:
As it is just the beginning of the story I can't say much. But so far the story is unwinding at a moderate paste and characters are introduced well. For now I give the plot 10/10. As it is clear and the scenes make sense and how the characters get introduced too.
Originality:
It seems like there's two love stories with family drama and college kid experiences. How original is that? In my opinion 65/35 for originality. 4
Flow of the story:
The story flows naturally from one pet to the next. So far for the beginning of the book it works great.
Overall enjoyment:
The last chapter left me wanting more. It is so far enjoyable story that flows well chapter to chapter. Can't wait to read on and find out more! 5
