Cover + Title + Blurb= 4/5 [the title is a bit confusing]
Grammar and Spelling= 10/10
Detail= 10/10
Plot= 9/10
Originality= 5/5 [I love it]
Flow of the story= 4/5 [I was confuse at the beginning]
Overall Enjoyment= 5/5
Total: 47/50
Try changing the title to ''My future'' or something like that with simple word.
In the first line, I was totally confused and I didn't want to read anymore but then the more I read the more the story becomes so interesting. I would like you to change the beginning, then everything was perfect
