First of all, these are just my personal opinions. Please don't feel discouraged. And no hard feelings! Also, I don't have any knowledge about poems, so if there are any mistakes, I'm sorry. Let's begin!
Words are not enough to describe the way I felt on the first chapters. It made me remember the memories I simply try to forget and made me feel like that girl who was head over heels in love once again. I am not the type of person that reads poems in free-times, actually, I don't even like poems that much. But there are always exceptions, like your book! There are only two things I want to say about the book and other than these, everything was perfect.
The first thing is that in some parts, rhyming was off because of the way you wrote them. Unfinished sentences that were seperated with dot or coma and extremely long verses made it a little bit hard to read. Maybe not seperating the parts that has rhymes into two sentences will help!
Secondly, I think the lenght of verses were off. Some parts they were too long but the one below it only has two sentences. I believe bringing them into an order and writing the poems in quadrants(?) will be much better -Just like how the writing was in the chapter 'What if I turn back time?'-
