All That Glistens Isn't Gold - LavenderSpice29
Reviewer - 28_pa_13
Cover, Title, and Blurb 3/ 5
Grammar and Spelling 9/ 10
Detail 7/ 10
Plot 9 / 10
Originality 5/ 5
Flow of the Story 4/ 5
Overall Enjoyment 5/ 5
Total 42 / 50
I LOVED this story. I don't know what about it but it all just connected. The story, plot, character, and detail all worked really well to create a movie in my head. It was perfect, and I enjoyed this story so much.
While there were some small mistakes there wasn't many. There could be more detail, but I liked it exactly how it was.
The only thing that bothered me was the last chapter. I was very confused on what was happening, and I know that was part of the story, I was very confused.
The tittle cover and blurb are not my favorite. Maybe the tittle could have something more to do with the book? The cover is very pretty, but maybe you could do something related to the family and boys? Finally the blurb I didn't like. Maybe you could cut out the first part? Just start with "since birth..."
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