These are just my opinions. I hope I wasn't too harsh with the review. Thank you for being patient.
The cover was nice and mysterious. At first, I imagined the character looking partly like the picture. The blurb felt a little unprofessional with the way the story was written. Maybe if it was worded like most of the chapters, it could be more appealing for the reader. Naming the book the way you did was a smart move.
The grammar and spelling was mostly used correctly except in a few longer paragraphs there were a few words missing which can be a little disregarding once the reader is fully invested in the book.
The details were kept to a minimum when it came to the supposed "dark" scenes in the chapters. Like in chapter three, we're mainly focused on what the character is feeling and that offers enough information to imagine the scene.
The plot was creative. I haven't really heard much about a plot like yours. It was unique and fresh at the start. Soon after the werewolves were added. That hindered my mind a little but I feel that they can be allies in the future.
The overall flow of the story was a little fast-paced but the long chapters helped it seem more normal. I'm sure many readers will appreciate the trigger warnings in some chapters.
Well, that was all from my side. I'm sorry that the review took so long. If you have any questions you can just ask me!
