Chapters 1-6 (not including aesthetics and synopsis, but from the prologue to chapter 5)
First of all, these are just my personal opinions. Please don't feel discouraged. And no hard feelings!
Let's begin! Okay let's start with the notes I took. Firstly, the title and the blurb was actually pretty good, but sadly, the cover was not as interesting as them. The previous ones that take place in your chapters were actually better (the ones in the synopsis -my personal fav- and chapter 5)!
Secondly, the chapters were too long to read. This makes it a little hard to keep your readers attention to the book. Because there was nearly nothing that captivated my attention, I couldn't finish the book and decided it was enough. I do understand that you might want to write longer to attract your readers, but if you do, each chapter must contain a conflict element. This doesn't always need to be a fight between the characters!
Thirdly, I think it would have been better if the names were given at the top when you decide to switch to another characters point of view in order to avoid confusion. Because of this, I thought Adrian was both Autumn and Harley.
And fourthly, there was no mention about Autumn being a drummer. I am sorry if I have a mistake about this part, but other than the description, there was no mention of drums. I always thought she was going to be the vocalist. Maybe mentioning the fact that she is the drummer anlittle bit more frequent might be better!
Other than these, there are of course things I loved! For example, the aesthetics were genius, it plays a huge role in details and helps to visualize everything. Not many writers think about this detail, so thank you! There were very few mistakes in grammar, which is a big advantage for you.
To sum up, shortening the chapters and giving the name of the character we are reading the view of will help you to develop a lot! Please don't forget that these are just my opinions and you don't need to take me very serious
