Please remember this is my opinion, and you don't have to change anything if you don't want to.
First, I just want to say, I have never read anything like that before. I've read things that are a bunch of different books squished together. I've read some books that are different versions of other books. I've also read books that were very different, but not exactly my favorite. But your book is something new!
I would also like to say great characters! You gave them personalities that fit them. You also described them and the scenes
Two thing to note: 1. It was a little confusing at the beginning, with who was who, what was what, ect. 2. I noticed you kept changing Nikas' pronouns. I'm not sure if that's on puorpose, but that's what I saw. It kept changing from They/Them to He/Him.
