Please remember that this is all just in my opinion, and you don't need to change anything if you don't want to. The blurb is okay, but add more information to it so that it will be mote enticing and attract more readers. The grammar is good, better than the average I've seen before so keep it up. There isn't really much to judge, it's just that the plot is a bit common but that's fine, as long as you can write it well. Overall, it was enjoyable to read, just keep in mind my observations. I was told to focus on every single thing and to judge this properly so I didn't sugarcoat my critiques and gave your book a proper score. Please don't be offended.
