These are just my opinions and I hope the review wasn't too harsh. Thank you for being patient.
The title and cover were eye-catching but the blurb could've been done better. If it was slightly longer and a bit more informative.
The spelling was great but there were quite a lot of grammar mistakes. The newer chapters were well written and longer. They had a lot more dialogue between the characters which was missing in the earlier chapters as well.
The details were kept to a minimum with the short chapters. This, I believe, was a weak point in the writing.
The plot was similar to a few stories but the dark aspects made it a lot more interesting in how the story might progress and how far the characters will go for their respective wants.
The characters were well described in the first chapter. The mood boards helped to identify the aura each character had.
The story was straight to the point and didn't really give us a lot of back story. It started at a midway point offering all kinds of theories. Slowing down and publishing longer chapters will be a lot better.
That was all I had. There weren't a lot of chapters yet and I hope you follow some of the things listed above.
