Remember, these are my opinions, and I bear no ill-will towards the author or their work. Also, unless I fully convince you - the author - or others have the same critiques, you don't have to change anything about your story.
First off, I want to congratulate you on your grammar. There were some mistakes here and there, but overall, it was spot on. Good job!
However, I would consider shortening your chapters, at least in the beginning. Most Wattpad users have the app on their phones and aren't likely to finish long chapters. If all your chapters are 7k words, as I saw you mentioned in an author's note, it would be good to cut and publish them into thirds. This also helps get chapters out quicker.
Another thing, I really enjoyed the amount of detail in and flow of the story. Nothing felt rushed, and it all fit neatly together in a way that felt satisfying.
Finally, I think taunting the romance would help keep the reader on the edge of their seat. For instance, instead of having Cara and Din kissing in the first chapter, tease the kiss but interrupt it before it can lead anywhere. This way, the reader will want to keep reading to see their ship sail.
But overall, your story was great, and your readers seem to love your book. I saw you discontinued the book, but I hope this helps with future projects. Have a good day! :)
