Shades of Purple

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by WAT3RM3LL

by WAT3RM3LL

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Shades of Purple - _rehyaa

Reviewer - babykookie545

Title/cover/blurb: 4/5
Grammar and spelling: 9.7/10
Details: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Originality: 5/5
Flow of the story: 5/5
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 47.7

Now let me explain my points on every topic. I am extremely sorry if you feel hurt or offended by this(:

Title- The title was clearly matching the storyline and that was great.

Cover- The cover of this book is amazing and was the first thing that attracted me to read the book that deserved good points.

Blurb- Talking about the blurb it's really nice but it needs some improvement. You see your blurb is amazing but it should attract the reader to read the story and the blurb didn't attract me much but overall it was good. So in total i gave this a 4/5

Grammar and spelling- Okay so... Coming to the grammar part I think there are not much errors in this story and it was really easy to read the spelling were correct too but there were some parts where the grammar needed fixing but overall this deserves a 9.7/10.

Details- The details of the story were fully clear to me. The way you explained the characters and story details is amazing. So this deserves a 10/10.

Plot- The plots needed a bit fixing like in some parts I couldn't understand the plots clearly but overall this deserves a 9/10.

Originality- If we talk about originality in this story it was amazingly awesome, like the way you showed the characters life and struggle made the originality in this story really good so this deserves a 5/5.

Flow of the story- Talking about the flow of the story it was really great.

The person reading the story including me clearly enjoyed the flow of the story and this deserved a 5/5.

Overall enjoyment- I enjoyed your book a lot you are a great writer and this deserved a 5/5 Keep writing!

I loved your book and I am extremely sorry if any of my said thing hurt or offended you but I picked your mistakes and appreciated your good things in the book. I hope you are doing all good. Take care and stay safe(: