I love the title so much. When I saw it, instantly wanted to know more about it, honestly. It's so unique a title, and it goes with the book.
Though your blurb is okay, the cover can be improved. Really, hun, it doesn't do your book enough justice. I think since it's fantasy, the cover needs to come out with that dark theme. I get that you probably wanted a dark theme, but, to balance it, let the darkness bring out the cover instead of hide it. I feel that's what's happening here.
The first chapter was so cool, no grammar or punctuation errors in sight, beautiful dialogue, wonderful descriptions, everything was spot on and beautiful. I applaud your writing ❤️
The pacing is deliberate enough to tell us what's going on without tossing Info in our faces, which is good. The language wasn't too thick or voluminous, but it had this ancient vibe to it, it was really cool and I enjoyed the book.
