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Reminiscence

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Reminiscence
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Author :: nameless_noelle

Reviewer :: gukkeun

First Impression :: 12/20

Dear, your cover isn't doing your story any justice. It's the complete opposite of the work of art you've bestowed upon me. Consider ordering from a professional graphics designer and make sure it'll conform to your story's plot. The colors seem more of a club and party aesthetics which doesn't suit your book very well. Your blurb is short, yet, provided enough intel on how magnification your writing is. It makes us yearn to find out how far you could expand it. I love it. As for your title, it's nothing impressive yet, I couldn't help but notice how much it connects to your story. So deep and profound.

Beginning of a new start :: 10/10

Blew me off right from the start. I dug deeper and what did I find? A masterpiece, an artwork deserving of all praises. I slammed 10 marks onto this empty piece of document as soon as I stepped into your world.

Concept & plot :: 25/25

I'm truly in love. it's basic, yet contains everything a oneshot should have. A cliffhanger at the end that still managed to make me satisfied with the ending and that, m'lady, is rare. It's non cliché, no changing of scenes, it's just perfect for a oneshot. Nothing else to say, ma'am, you go ahead and shove this beauty of artwork into everyone's faces and receive those well earned reads.

Characters & emotions :: 15/15

Realistic, and truly relatable. Unlike some authors who think it's easy and plain enough to reunite two people who went through so many hardships and divorced. You made them bond in such a heartbreaking way yet gave us readers a warm sensation and left it tickling our poor spines.

Tone & style :: 10/10

Ma'am, provide me with some of your talents and I assure you I'll use them to help acquire you the success you haven't yet owned. Your writing is the reason I'm here in the first place and I'm not letting anyone pull me out from the warm waves that are your cursive writing. (Nothing I say makes sense at this point please understand how much you've affected me and pay my medical bills.)

Grammar :: 20/20

A full 20? Am I drunk? No, you are for thinking you'd get any less from that in the first place. Punctuation errors? Misusage of dialogue tags? Never heard of them. Yes, enjoy that full 20 course marks for giving me the wildest ride of my life.

An extra note :: I'm genuinely drowning in confusion. How is it that a masterpiece such as "Reminiscent" is yet to be made known? You've managed to impress me lady, I'm honored to be given the chance to indulge in your writing. It's a wonderful start to the second version of Seesaw. Your story made me smile to no end and I'm not afraid to call out on your talent. I deeply wish to own a talent you may call yours one day, do make me proud by shoving more of these stories into our fellow readers' minds. I pray you'll receive the recognition you very much deserve.

TOTAL :: 92/100