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Plexure

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Plexure
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Author :: -Yoonshooky

Reviewer :: Kim_eats

First impression :: 16/20

The title of the book is very different and intriguing. It'd definitely attract many readers. The cover is eye catching and as far as I've read, I can say that the cover expresses the vibe of the book quite well. The only thing I'd suggest is to make the title bigger to be clearly visible.
Your blurb is short and sweet. It doesn't give much away, nor is it too short to not give the readers an idea about the book. It creates a mysterious vibe and I'm sure, it'd make the readers press that read button. So, overall, Plexure left a good first impression on me.

Beginning of a new start :: 9/10

The first few chapters were really great. The mood setters, the trailer were great additions. The beginning really kept me hooked to the story, since Jimin and Y/N seem to have a good relationship but all of a sudden, the facade of perfection disappears, making Jimin question everything he has known for so long.

Concept and plot ::  20/25

I really loved the concept of this book. Mysterious, dark, shrouded in lies. Though the plot isn't exactly unique, since the roles are reversed, it sets the book apart from others with the same plot. Most of the time we see the male lead being the seducer, liar, and user but I this case, he is the one seduced and lied to. So, I really liked the change and of course, a strong female lead, who happens to be 'Y/N'.

Character & emotions  :: 11/15

All the characters are portrayed very well. Their involvement in the book important in different ways, but no one is what they look like. I really liked that element. For emotions, they were expressed just as well. It didn't exactly pierce my heart when Jimin found out about Y/N, but still, I felt the other emotions, like his despondency when he found out about Namjoon. I just wish that the scenes after his abduction are a little more descriptive. In that aspect, I thought the story became a little fast paced. If you look through these points and try adding and improving, it'd sure turn out amazing.

Tone & style :: 8/10

I liked that you chose to stick to the third person pov while writing. It conveyed everything properly. Your language and use of words were easy to understand but it could have been more developed in the sense of vocabulary. But other than that, your writing style kept me hooked to the book. So, good job!

Grammar :: 15/20

For the first few chapters, the grammar was almost perfect, but after a specific chapter, I started seeing many mistakes. The most common of these were, run on sentences, dialogue tag, and incorrect spelling. With the incorrect spellings, it was a case of using the wrong homophones but at times, it was just a confusion I think. For example, you wrote 'bought' instead of 'brought'. There was also one where 'drenched' was spelled incorrectly. All these mistakes are easily avoidable by proofreading. So, I suggest you do that before publishing a chapter because wrong grammar is always a big damper.

I hope this review is taken positively and helps you with your writing!

Total :: 79/100