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An old Enchantment

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An old Enchantment
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Author :: Coraline005

Reviewer :: athenaxglamour_

First impression :: 15/20

Wow! A nice way to start my review for the first impression of the book. I absolutely fell in love with the cover and the title — they both had me in a state of fangirling. But I wasn't satisfied with the blurb. Let's talk about everything more in detail. Sit back and enjoy. 

» Cover :: 8/10

I loved it. Honestly, I have no words to describe the attractiveness of the cover. The cover perfectly suits the genre and the plot of the book. But I did find an issue with the size of the font. The size of the title's font was pretty okay, but the author name wasn't quite visible. So, I recommend increasing the size of the author name under the title.  Now, I will go more in depth. 

1) explicit or direct view (the basics):
The cover had all the basics of any traditional cover. Most of all, the background image had me in love. But you can add some quote or a pick up line from your book, in order to make it less barren. There is only title and author name on the cover, which is enough but your book's genre demands complexity on the cover. 

2) implicit or indirect view (how this cover relates to the book?):
Definitely, it relates to your book. When I have finished reading the main conflict of the plot, I find it completely relevant. No change required here. 

↱︎Reviewer's tip :: Like I said, your book's genre is complex, so you must add more complexity by adding a quote or pick up line. But it's entirely up to you. It was merely a suggestion. 

» Title :: 5/5 

Stupendous! I mean I don't have any perfect adjective to describe this area. I believe you came up with the idea of this title after a lot of contemplation because this is exactly what I needed as a reader. Uniqueness isn't necessary but the title not just relates to your book, indirectly, but I have barely seen anyone using such a poetic title for their book. When I pronounce it verbally— it bewitches me and I glance at the cover, which ultimately leads me to the storyline. 

↱❛ Reviewer's tip :: I know you added a fancy text on the title page for aesthetic purposes but it might not be visible for Android users. So I suggest that you should use a simple font for the title. 

» Blurb: 2/5 

The blurb is unclear at the first glance. I had to read it multiple times to understand its meaning. It was full of information that was confusing me. I will point it out below: 
 
1- Non-technical issues
As I said, there was a lot of confusing information that I didn't quite understand. 

➡ [ Humans who had been programmed for their behaviours and emotions since the ancient times, end up with a bug while being reset after the discovery of this fact.] Humans have been programmed since ancient times. I understood it. But I don't understand the fact that has been discovered? 

➡ [A missing supernatural being of the world's ruling cult, a struggling student a gifted future predictor and one serial killer.] This sentence seems incomplete too. I guess you introduced the main characters here, but you left them on a read. It's like you should tell me why and how they contribute to such a big clash? 

2- Technical issues

➡ When stating the qualities of a person or something in a series, always use a comma. In the below paragraph, there should be a comma before 'a gifted future predictor'. [A missing supernatural being of the world's ruling cult, a struggling student, a gifted future predictor and…]