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Scars to your Beautiful

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Scars to your Beautiful
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Author :: BtsJeonku

Reviewer :: sprite_and_hamburger

First impression :: 4/20

The first impression is everything on Wattpad. People only read your book on the basis of your first impression. If your book didn't impress them then you can't expect them to read let alone open the book.

cover :: 2/10
The fanart you used for your cover comes under plagiarism because the designer stated that they don't want their art reposted. Before you say you gave credit in the description I would like you to read the rules about fanarts and plagiarism. Even if we ignore all this the pic you choose for the cover has nothing to do with your plot. The font you used for the username is catching all the attention and the looks empty. It would have been good if you choose a more suitable pic.

title :: 1/5
"Scars to your beautiful" this line itself is very deep so I was impressed with the title when I read it. It made me eager to read the book because I thought when the title is deep then the book will obviously be deep but I was so wrong. The plot and the title are irrelevant to each other. I read the book and couldn't find anything which can justify the title but there was none. You shouldn't just pick any deep-meaning word if they don't go with your plot. A title should be relevant to the plot and it should give an insight into the plot.

blurb :: 1/5
There's no perfect formula for writing the best blurb for the books but there are some important things you should/can include in your blurb. Introducing the protagonist in a way that creates intrigue without delving into details or referencing the central point of conflict without explaining how a resolution may come about is the best way to write a blurb. After reading your blurb I came to the conclusion that your book is about a broken girl with scars and a boy who made her know what love is but when I read the book I found no such things in the book. It seems like you were describing a totally different book. You have grammar mistakes in your blurb as well and you switched the pov after writing the dialogue which is wrong. Whenever you write a blurb please make sure the blurb reflects your book.

Beginning of a new start :: 3/10

The story starts with a girl (Y/N) planning to propose to a boy (Suho) but Suho rejected her on the spot. He said he doesn't like her and he was with her only because she was sick. Y/N left heartbroken and asked his father To change her school and then you changed your pov from 1st person to 3rd person without any notice. The change of pov wasn't needed in that scene, you could have just written it all first person.

The first chapter/prologue was full of grammatical mistakes and wrong punctuation but trust me it has fewer mistakes than any other chapter in the book.

Concept & plot :: 5/25

The story starts with Y/N who was in pain because of her heart condition. She went to her school and then her teacher announced that they have good news which turns out to be the entry of new transfer student Jeon Jungkook. The pace of the story is very fast, your flow is going like a bullet train.

There are visible plot holes in the book. Jungkook and Y/N saw each other in the class for the first time then suddenly the class was over Jungkook asked Y/N to show the principal office and the next moment Jimin came and said he wants her to meet his friend which was Jungkook. When Jungkook was with Y/N the whole time then how come Jimin met him?