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To be honest the whole slature of the book made quite an impact on me as I was flabbergasted to read it at any moment I find myself free. It had a strange pull that was enough to get me to read it slowly, in a motion where I'd simply savor everything that's penned down.
The cover was simple, a good simple, it had the dead vibes - the concept of dull luster where you know what you were signing for but there still was something that bored a corner of my mind, I don't really know how to point it out but whatever it was - it was unusual - the aura around it was quite off when seen from a non critical view and that sometimes setts off the opportunity of readers liking the first thing they see - cover.
I like the name, in all honesty, I don't see people really familiar with phobias or philes and when someone actually erupts with an idea that liking I get a deep convicting liking to it - and the aura around the book is also like the name's meaning - it sets a dark and menacing aura that makes you realize that this ain't your fairytale royalty.
Beginnings of a new start :: 5/10
A major downfall - the arrangement - I seriously love your book planning and idealistic approach and everything but while writing fantasy you also need arrangement in terms of getting your readers into the feels - the feels of offsetting royalties and their lush secrets.
The prologue can be arranged in the following outlet :
Thantophobia (n.) fear of death or the passing of a beloved.
❝ when they were every bit of a sudden ravine, but I couldn't stop myself from the fall and then be stranded ❞
An empire standing over the edges of non relied trust and beheld beliefs of humanity, and a queen who believes in love and life but what is it about her that feels so sinful?
A warrior, the said former queen, with irises so different that outshine the glimmer of deities, worshipped as a goddess yet feared like a wolf; what makes her lose all human interaction?
Seven brothers, bewitching every human in their binding spell of love and kindness but yet they hold an aura as if everyone's unwanted but them, building barriers around their emotions.
