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Life And It's Consequences

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Life And It's Consequences
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Author :: YoIamnicepaprika_7

Reviewer :: athenaxglamour_

First impression :: 13/20

Since I have already read and reviewed the sequel of this book, I won't say that anything was hidden from me. I actually loved the message that you were trying to convey, but there are a few areas where you need work. I'll break them down for you.

» Cover :: 7/10
Okay so this is a magazine style cover. But the typographic view is quite unclear. The font is pretty hard to read. I thought there might be some issue with my eyes, but my friend thinks the same about the cover. So make the font more visible. Now, I will go more in depth.

1) explicit or direct view (the basics):
I didn't find any issue here. The cover has all the basics of a traditional wattpad cover. The only problem is the font which I asked you to change previously.

2) implicit or indirect view (how this cover relates to the book?):
The storyline actually revolves around a dark theme. So I don't think that this picture of Jeon Jungkook is suitable for that dark theme. This give a more chill vibe. I mean, look at Mr. Jeon Jungkook, he is standing on the cover with all might and grace, which is totally different from Jungkook's personality in the book.

↱︎Reviewer's tip :: I would suggest that you go with a more complex cover style. Try the cover shop of the Kpop house community because we don't just design covers, but we put emotions into it too. I am telling you this because the cover of any book should be the best. The current one is quite simple and does not provide justice to your book.

» Title :: 5/5
I remember I previously asked you to avoid long titles. There is absolutely no harm in using titles with more than three words. But don't make it sound like you are reading a line from the book.

Death and its consequences: When I pronounce it, it doesn't sound like I am reading a line from the book. It's just a final title which gives me the insight of the story. Same goes for 'Life and it's consequences.'

My boyfriend is a bully but I love him: Oh God! What did I just read? This is a title from a book on wattpad with millions of views. By just reading it, I have read the whole damn book. Don't do that ever because it's annoying as hell. Don't write such kind of titles.

You see the difference? So from that difference, the title of your book is totally fine. I just wanted to make sure that if you decide to use long titles in future, please keep in mind my above statement. Also, the title is completely relevant to the storyline. No change required. 

» Blurb :: 1/5
The blurb is too short, dear. Only one line isn't enough for the readers. Also, it is also in fancy text. It makes it look like you didn't add that one line too, when I read the blurb from Android. You should add some more details about the book. Don't worry, I will help you with it instead of blabbering.

When we talk about the blurb, especially the blurb of wattpad stories. We add four main elements in it. No matter if your book is a historical fiction, fanfic, fantasy, or a comedy.

Here is a brief information on four elements of a blurb. You can take a look at it and try adding them in your blurb to make it more presentable. Please remember that we don't need to add each one of them. Only two elements are enough. But make sure you add them quite adequately.