BOOK : LOOK AT ME RAIN
Author : ItsmeAxelle_
Reviewer : shivika1999
Title (Titre)
The title is good from my point of view, it's touchy and I smell the seasonal flavour in this title.
Cover (Couventure)
The cover is nice and addorable, especially the fonts. I like the clean title and sub header and the good
contrast of brown and white texts.
Blurb (la description)
The description is short and sweet , I really love this seasonal quote.
Storyline (Scènario)
The poem carries a wonderful journey by the author. With full of love, family, romance, mystery and most importantantly, the seasonal epic flavour and the love between the lines . This poem line is different from
others. The way of presentation is extraordinary.
Character (Personnages)
Every character in this verse is explained in detail by the author to avoid any confusion. The way author
potrayed thier pictures comples ourselves to imagine with the flow of the poem lines.
Grammar (Grammaire)
The grammar is awesome. It carries on well till now. The exact stopping point, continuity, other means of tenses everything is perfect.
Just remember one point; the way you carry the dialogue, sometimes it makes some gap. Consistency is the key. Grammar rules don't cover everything. As a writer, you will constantly be challenged to make judicious decisions about how to construct your sentences and paragraphs. Always be consistent. Keeping a style guide handy will be a tremendous help.
Flow (Couler)
The flow of your poem in each segment is literally awesome. It's going well till the end. You find yourself turning page after page, unable to put the book down? You have been so engrossed that you haven't noticed someone talking to you?You completely forgot what you've been reading at all? These all the points make a one a perfect
book. I think you did well with your poetics device.
Reviewer's opinion (Critique)
This is different from others poems. Unexpectedly crazy and flavours at the correct end.. By personal, I love
the rhymetics . Grammar is good.
Good stuff story. Keep going. All the best. I'm waiting for your other upcoming plots.
Superb book. I loved it.
I would rate this story 9.8/10
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