Book name: Unrejected Mates
Author name: GosiaAC
Reviewer: shivika1999
TITLE: 10/10
The title is so nice. The name itself identifies the unbreakable bond between two ideal love partners.
COVER: 9.5/10
The cover is very nice and addroable. Especially the fonts. I really loved it. However, need to take some extra care for inner design as well.
BLURB: 7/10
The story is awesome from the plot prospective. However, it needs a description. Because it's very important for every
storyline to make the readers curious. Moreover your book has sequences. Even though it stands alone, needs to have more clarification to avoid confusion. Otherwise it excels.
STORY LINE: 9/10
The story carries a wonderful journey of the protagonists with the love, family bonding, romance and cute fights.This story line is different from others. The way of presentation is extraordinary. Looks like a
novela. I really enjoyed it.
CHARACTERS: 7/10
I would suggest give a little description of every character before entering the story.
GRAMMAR: 7/10
The grammar has some flaws in the middle of the story. Others the rest is well.
DIALOGUES/EXPRESSION: 7/10
Just remember one point, the way of carrying the dialogue makes some plain consistency. Grammar rules don't cover everything. As a writer, you will constantly be challenged to make judicious decisions about how to construct your sentences and paragraphs. Always be consistent. Keeping a style guide handy will be a tremendous help.
CREATIVITY/ORIGINALITY: 8/10
The storyline is very original. Kudos.
FLOW: 8/10
No such complaints.
OVERALL ENGAGEMENT: 9/10
The story kept me engaged all the time. I can say, it's a one go read. Well done.
REVIEWER'S OPINION:
It is a wonderful love story. A pure bliss, adorable care, love, affection, cute fights. Last but not theleast, their attachment. Excellent parts, exclusive love scenes, super cute plots. The way author expressioned every word is superb. All the best for your upcoming storylines. Keep going with good work. I will be waiting for your upcoming plots.
Total: 81.5/100
I hope my review will help you. All the best for your future endeavour.
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