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Broken Love (Cathy)

Book name: Broken love

Author name: Dipanwita86

Reviewer:CathrineRajkumar

Review:

Title: (Titre) 8/10

Your title is good and unique. I really liked your title.

Cover: (Couverture) 9/10

Cover is the one that attracts the readers' attention first. Your cover is simply awesome. I liked the quote on your cover. But make it little bigger and prominant.

Blurb (La Description): 9/10

The description is really good and it increases my curiosity to know what happens next in the story.

Storyline: (Scénario)9/10

The story line is really good. Though we can read lots of betrayal story here in wattpad. But this one is really good different and unique.

Dialogue/Expression:10/10

You expressed your words in the story perfectly. I love the conversation between Aman and Arnav, and also between Arnav and Lavanya.

Creativity/originality:(La créativité/Originalité) 8/10

Overall engagement:(Engagement global) 7/10

Characters: (Personnages) 8/10

All the characters are portrayed well, they conveyed the emotions really well. May it be angry, guilty, love, betrayal everything is portrayed well.

Grammar: (Grammaire) 9/10

There is not any grammatical errors or typos. You really did a great job.

Flow: (Couler) 7/10

I couldn't say much about the flow of your story because there are only three parts. But from those three parts, there is no stop in the flow.

Reviewer opinion: (Critique)

I really loved the story. But in the first part of the story there is repetition of some paragraphs. So kindly edit it. And also in some places, you have added names between the paragraph maybe for posting photos . So, either add photos or remove them.

Your total score is 84/100 or 4.2/5

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