Author : wrongwarp
Reviewer : TheBookishNerd_
Title : 9/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb : 8/10
A bit more descriptive blurb is needed.
Plot and flow : 18/20
The way Hannah's fears and frustration in her real life are described and compared to game is really good. One could not only understand but also feel what she is experiencing. So yes, the plot of using the game to describe the lead's fears and frustration is really unique.
Dialogue and Expression: 10/10
Hannah's feeling and emotions which is the main thing in the story is expressed very well.
Grammar, spelling and typo: 8/10
Few typing mistakes in using capitalisation specially in blurb. I suggest you rectify them.
Creativity: 9/ 10
The way of showing Hannah's feelings by comparing it with the game is something very different and creative.
Overall appeal : 18/20
I found the os really interesting. Though I have read about pokepasta and creepypasta first time I will
definitely recommend this one shot to the Creepypasta fandom.
Total: 88/100
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