The Penderghast Prophecy

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Book- The Penderghast Prophecy

Written by Pushppa177

Reviewed by Daisy_srt

Proofread by stars_firefly

Title (Titre)

Title is an important aspect of a book. Your title is very catchy. Great job with it.

Cover (couverture)

The cover is great. I love the colours. In a way it also tells you what the book is about. The only thing is that the title has been cut out. Just reduce the size of the font. Otherwise everything else is amazing.

Blurb (la description)

The blurb is nice. There are a few scenes from the book which is great. One can read the blurb to find out what exactly happens. It hooks a reader to the book. Great job with that as well.

Storyline (scènario)

The storyline is amazing. It is fantasy and magic which is everything you need in a book and personally being a lover of Harry Potter, I absolutely loved it. You have used your imagination beautifully. There is a lot that has yet to unfold. No complains here as well.

Grammar (grammaire)

Your command on the language is great. There are hardly any grammatical errors in the book. The scenes have been explained beautifully with lots of intricate details.

Characters (personnages)

The characters are interesting as well. The characters could have been explained better but there are just 4 chapters so there isn't much to say. But I would love the book more if you describe how Saffron actually is.

Flow ( Couler)

The flow of the book is perfect. There were no break while reading. Good Job!

Reviewer opinion ( critique)

There are no such complains from my side. You have done a great job with everything. I would just love to read a little bit more about the characters. I am eager to know what happens next.

I hope this review has helped you. All the best!

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