Author: maha_manan1108
Reviewer: Bubbleluv20
Title(Titre) :5/10
The title was ok but I think you should give a different title to your story.
Cover(Coverture): 8.5/10
The cover was good it gave a new meaning to the book I loved it.
Blurb(La description): 9.5/10
The blurb was nice , It makes your readers curious to peep into your story.
Storyline(Scenario): 10/10
I loved the way you wrote the story. From the prologue itself the story is awesome. Each and every character is described very nicely.
Dialogue /Expression: 9.9/10
Each and every character in your story has a unique way of expression. I like the way you described them.
Creativity/originality(La créativité/Originalité): 10/10
I loved the imagination that you, your brain, your heart created. A wonderful story I have never read something like this before.
Overall engagement/Engagement global: 10/10
Overall the story is intersting.
Grammar/Grammaire:7/10
There were some grammatical mistakes in-between some words. Please correct them.
Characters(Personages): 10/10
There are many characters involved in your story. The way you chose them and the way you described them was lovely. You gave meaning to each and every characters and described them perfectly. I loved the innocence of Nandini and Pari.
Flow(Couler): 9.5/10
The flow was normal in all the situation, expect in flashback scene it ended too fast. But the pace was neither too slow nor too fast which is great. I loved the way u ended the story. In my opinion it was perfect.
Reviewer's Opinion (Critique):10/10
This story is a totally new concept and it is very nice.
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