Book name- Love and hate
Author- PareshayUfq
Reviewer- Curious_writer7
Tittle(Titre)
The Title used by you is very common on Wattpad , you could have made it more different and eye-catchy.
Cover (coverture)
There was no cover it was just a plain picture of an actress which lost my interest in reading the story, I suggest you make a cover or if you don't know how to make one , you can connect with any professional graphic designer and that will help you to attract the readers by making a beautiful cover .
Blurb(la description)
There was no Blurb provided for readers , a blurb is a very important part for a reader to choose the story and I would suggest you to write it.
Story plot(scenerio)
The plot was the same plot as the show which seems boring to the readers , and I suggest you change your story plot or make it interesting by adding your creativity in it .
Grammar(grammerie)
The first two initial chapters , you used the English language and then rest of them were in Hindi. So that's why I didn't find any grammar mistakes.
Characters ( Personnages)
The characters were quite the same as in the show which again seems boring to the readers so try and make it a little bit different . Also, explain them specifically as a reader I didn't find myself connecting to the characters.
Flow(couler)
The flow of the story was slow which makes the reader lose their interest in the story . I'll suggest you focus on main characters more.
Reviewer opinion (critique)
You have to focus more on the creative side of the story like the cover, blurb and title stuff. I would suggest you to write your book in English but not roman-Hindi, it was just my personal opinion about the language thing don't mind. I hope my review helps you to be a good writer and have more views . Also, Don't take anything negative please it just about experience.
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