Book name - If you were mine to keep
Author- _aatiq_
Reviewer- Nandi1103
Title (Titre)
The title of the story was really awesome. It gave an idea about the story. It was neither simple nor heavy, it was classic in its own way but ya I suggest you to change the title from "if you were mine to keep" to "If You Were Mine To Keep" It's your choice to change.
Cover (couverture)
I felt there could be something more to the cover as it was way too ordinary for such a good story. I suggest you to change it.
Blurb (la description)
Woah, blurb was just amazing. It was intruding enough to make a reader definitely read the story...It depicts the story, about two main characters, and the 'love in one week' part makes it more interesting...Good Job!!
Storyline (scènario)
I really appreciate that you wrote on such concepts, insecurities in a relation, depression, self harm, and mental health. An amazing plot with mixtures of problems of one's life...But I felt a bit disappointed in the last second part of the story, I felt there could be something more to it but I too can understand it's difficult to write about mental health, depression, and all the things that are going in one's life.Overall the plot was amazing.
Grammar (grammaire)
Grammatical skills, imagination skills were just amazing...I didn't found any such loophole in the grammar part...
Characters (personnages)
The description of characters was good, by reading further and further, I felt like there is something more and more to the characters...You really described it well...
Flow ( Couler)
The flow of the story is good.It was neither slow nor too fast except the last second chapter as I said earlier. Overall Good Job!!
Reviewer opinion ( critique)
The story is really amazing, I suggest you change the title's font( capital letters) and if possible try to make the cover more interesting...Overall the story is good, it depicted a teen's life who had face many problems and is still facing it and how a person who too has a bad past comes and try to heal her, the problems that we face in a relationship, the problems that we face in the real life that gives either completes our life or makes us stronger are depicted in the story. An amazing work done by the writer!
Stars:- 4/5
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