Author : reveur_12
Reviewer : dramaqueen_Nahar
Title/Titre :5/10
Story title doesn't match the story. It should be "Billionaire's secret love story". No offense, just gave a friendly advice.
Cover/Couverture : 6/10
Story cover isn't that interesting to cought eyes of a curious reader. It should be improvised.
Blurb/La Description : 6/10
Story blurb isn't that good to get a reader's attention. It should be written in a mysterious way so that it can create curiosity for a reader.
Dialogue/Expression : 9.5/10
Story dialogues were good enough. I have nothing to complain about it.
Creativity/originality(La créativité/Originalité) : 9.5/10
Story creativity was awesome. I loved the story plot and your writing skills.
Overall engagement/Engagement global : 9/10
Overall it is a nice story.
Grammar/Grammaire : 10/10
I didn't find any grammatical mistake.
Characters/Personnages : 10/10
I am impressed with story characters. William and Jake's bond is amazing.
Flow/Couler : 10/10
Story flow is interesting and it actually creates curiosity to read more. Well done girl.
Reviewer's opinion: Writer should change the story title, cover and blurb to make the story more interesting and eye catchy. Thank you....🙏
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