I'm planning on rewriting this story, like I'm going to make a whole other book but it's the same just slightly better. I want all of the characters that introduced in this book and actually make them important. Also make the story shorter and getting rid of some things that I don't really want. But I wanted to ask you guys what were some of your favorite/ want to keep moments so I can include them in the rewritten version. I will be keeping most characters (Kai, Yuki, Minato, Kokichi, Shuichi) I just want to make it better.
I will start on it today and it will be published on December 17th Friday, I'll try my best to get a chapter out and also make illustrations too.
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Their son Saiouma/other
FanfictionThis story does not just target Saiouma, the more you read the less of it. Kokichi Ouma has given birth to a child, not knowing who the real father is, finding out and dumb stuff shortly after Kai goes to through many challenges in life even traumat...
