So after going back and thoroughly reading through this story, I have noticed that it moved a little too fast. There was not a lot of build up to climactic events and overall was poorly written.I started writing this when I was the fragile age of 11 and everything was unicorns and Harry Potter. I have grown as a writer since then and I want to reflect that in my writing. The next 4 or 5 chapters will answer some questions you may have about the plot line as well as make the story more well-rounded. I will pick up right after chapter 29 after this is done. I know that you guys are a bit on a cliffhanger( well, not really) but, I have to go back in order to move foreward. Another thing is that this book is coming to an end. After chapter 30 we will have only 5 or 6 chapters left. I want to thank all the people that have been here since the beginning and welcome all our newcomers. I want to thank you all for inspiring me to succeed and become the best writer that I can be.
I want to give a special shout out to metaphysically who has been helping me with this and my number one commenter for this book. I wanna thank hotmicrowave who has helped me with my writing. Special thanks to you!
I will be saying what chapters these events happen. Please read them because if you don't the rest of the story will make a lot less sense and the jokes won't be funny.
Alright, I talked a lot today and I really wanna update this soon so I have to go work on that.
Peace, Love, and Star Wars
Ali
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Dancing in the Rain ( Editing)
Teen Fiction"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning how to dance in the rain" Bianca Allen is perfectly average. At least that's what she wants you to believe. She stays out of drama and never crawls out of her comfort zone. Althou...
