Reviewed by -jolyne
Author: Witto150
Title: Silver Darkness
Genre: Fanfic (Sonic The Hedgehog),
Cover : 3 / 5
I like this concept , too , but there is huge color - clashing and it's a bit blurred, too
Blurb : 1 / 5
A bit long , and there's already misspellings and grammar issues :/ Not a great start.
Title : 5 / 5
Silver darkness sounds pretty cool , not even gonna lie about it.
Plot : 7 / 10
Almost immediate conflict and honestly , I'm not a huge fan of that . It seemed to be really rushed and I'd really recommend using a different plot device to get things going.
Character development : 13 / 15
I don't really see a whole lot of it. Although it is a fanfiction , you should still try and develop them a bit more , especially since it isn't a short one - shot / one - act story.
Spelling / grammar : 6 / 10
A whole lot of grammar issues were found and there were a variety of them. Also , split the dialogue tags from the dialogue itself so that the paragraphs aren't dauntingly long
Overall : 6 / 10
Honestly , can't say much about the actual characters and how true they are to canon since I've never been a big fan of sonic , but I can definitely see how some effort was put in to this story :)
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