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Jo: Saving The Villain

Reviewed by -jolyne-

Author: PreciousNinja
Genre: Action
Title: Saving The Villain

Cover 2/5

- seems a little scattered, but i could tell you put the effort into it. nonetheless, i'd really recommend using better programs or asking from a shop ( i run one but don't feel pressured to ask from me. but i'd do it for free since you're following :D 

Blurb 1/5

- it's gonna sound a little harsh but the whole concept of weak standing up to super strong is unrealistic to me and i don't really like it. maybe she has another trait to her, but so far, i don't really see what she has.  

Title 3/5

- i really like the saving villain concept not gonna lie. especially when marvel brings super hot villains like loki 

- it just seems too obvious about what the plot is going to be. i'd recommend making it so there's a lot more of the mystery component

Plot 7/10

- tbh if there was more, i might've given more points but just based off the beginning, it didn't seem like much. 

Character development 7/15

- same thing with plot. i have no idea what the villain is like, and the interaction between him and curly is a little confusing

Spelling and grammar 7/10

- there weren't a lot of spelling mistakes, but grammar was a bit messy. and a bit messy can really translate into a lot in a chapter so short. 

Overall 6/10

- it's ok so far, and the foreword was entertaining and all, but it was a bit much. not because of the puns because i love them, but the whole author / reader interaction bit