Cade: Delusion

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Reviewed By Keeper Cade Brema_stone_is_alive

Author: -BlueSpark-
Title: Delusion 

Cover 4/5

It is nice and all but I think it could be a little better just because I like more detailed covers. Not that yours is not detailed it could just be more detailed?

Blurb 4/5

The blurb tells us just enough about the book so job well done 💜

Title 5/5

I tend to say this a lot but your title is a good fit for your book. 

Plot 8/10

Easy to follow and written almost perfectly with little to no holes.

Character development 12/15

I feel like you rush when you write your chapters strictly because you don't tell us more about the characters as you write.

Spelling and Grammar 7/10

You add the wrong endings to your words a lot.

Overall 7/10

I really do not care for BTS when it comes to k-pop so it wad hard for me to read your book. 

I do apologize if it seems like I am bein blunt again I am dealing with things right now and it has been so tuff for me this last week. With as much love and respect possible~ Cade 💜

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