Reviewed by CaliKat000
Title: Helix Primordial
Author: DerrickMoore6
Genre: Science Fiction
Cover: 2/5
I like your cover. It gives a more space like or Sci-fi feeling to the book at first glance. I don’t think it gives much personality to the book itself though.
Blurb: 4/5
The blurb is good but there is unnecessary information. The first paragraph is hard to follow with all the complexity of the word structure. The next paragraph is a great start for your blurb and for future readers. Readers like to be introduced to at least one of the characters right away. The third paragraph in the blurb I find to be ‘too much’ information. You already have a two paragraph introduction to your story. You don't want to give too much information away. The end of your blurb I feel wraps things up and gives some insight into what's going to happen.
Title: 4/5
For me, I found the title hard to say at first but then I got the hang of saying it. It’s a good title and fits the book really well. Gives a foreshadow sense to it.
Plot: 9/10
Very intriguing plot! The introduction to the book really surprised me. I didn’t really know what I was expecting but whatever I was thinking was blown out the water as I read how precisely things where written and how strongly the plot started out. There is a lot of action which I like and it has very original concepts.
Character Development: 15/15
Character description and imagery really stand out. When I was reading I could really visualize each character. I like that you make each personality stand out. None of the characters share the exact same mindset. They have their own values and promises about themselves.
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
You have amazing writing skills. The way you come up with concepts and the wording of it all made me feel like I was there, in your book. I don’t have the greatest grammatical skills but I know when someone else does and you definitely do!
Overall: 9/10
I really liked the action that was going on and the cliffhangers that made me want to read on and on. Your a great writer and I pray someday I will be able to be as creative and diligent in writing as you are.
Other Comments:
So Sorry This Is Late! I had MCA Testing, ACT Testing, Midterms Plus Homework These past few weeks!
Hope this review helps you<3
Kat <3
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