Reviewed by -jolyne-
Author: Justice K. (@1134Words)
Title: Home
Genre: Fantasy
Review
Cover : 5 / 5
Super minimalistic , sleek and just nice to look at!
Blurb : 5 / 5
Really made me excited to read the story , so the blurb is done really well ! :)
Title : 4 / 5
In my opinion , it's a bit too generic . Maybe try and get a bit more creative with it ?
Plot : 9 / 10
Really good pace , the beginning ( first chapter ) just seemed a tad bit weak...
Character development : 15 / 15
Even though it's just the first three chapters , right off the bat , I could see the personalities of the characters and the overall system of how the group worked .
Spelling and grammar : 6 / 10
Blocking and dialogue marks were just a bit messy and generic.
Overall : 9 / 10
An amazing concept with a very interesting background story <3 i'd love to see this developed further into a longer piece ! :)
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