Reviewed by Key Keeper Cade Brema_stone_is_alive
Title: To Believe In Love
Author: DarkRoyallty
Cover 5/5
Your cover was fabulous if I do say so myself! (I do!)
Blurb 3/5
Your blurb is nice I do think it could tell more about Mecha there so that we can understand her more and how she acts instead of having to listen to her co-workers talk about her and follow her actions throughout the story because I found it hard to understand how she was because she kept on changing but that is just me
Title 4/5
I liked your title I just wish it was something more original if that is even the word to use when describing it.
Plot 10/10
I think your plot is very easy to understand. Girl is a robot she can not feel anything but a guy likes her makes a bet and long story turned short BOOM they end up together or at least that is what I got from it. It was a little cliche but your writing style made it original in its own ways.
Character development 14/15
As mentioned before you could have done intros but you did not and that is fine but I guess its not what most of the stories I read use but yours was good but it wss kinda hard to understand Mecha to me because all I got was she hated love.
Spelling and grammar 10/10
I could not find any errors while reading which shows you have put a lot of time and effort into writing your story.
Overall 9/10
I enjoyed reading your book and a tip I am going to give you is to try and make the start of your sentences different. I tend to use the sane words over and over again and it gets boring to read after a while but otherwise your book was really good!
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